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Sunday, September 28, 2008

Update1.0 Chapters Separated

I've reformated the chapters into different parts to lessen eye problem because i got complaints saying it's hard to read since so many words are together. So i've separated it. Hope you like it!

Monday, September 8, 2008

Saberboy-Chapter 5(Part 3)

Zolan. He had long, black hair that reached to his shoulders. He was wearing something that looked like a black jacket except it had that added matrix outfit. His pants were also black except it looked as if it was black iron. He wore a long ragged black cape that reached his feet. His eyes were cold blue and he had that evil look that would make anyone shudder. And now he was looking at me. "My future enemy", he said pointing towards me with his bone-like finger. His voice sounded like a dead man saying his last few words. It was as if his throat was stuck by a mouse. He was flying mid-air looking at me, ignoring everything else, ignoring the screaming civilians, ignoring the guards aiming their weapons at him, ignoring the danger that was coming to him. Instantly, a guard screamed, Fire!" I didn't know what he was talking about. All of the guards were either holding spears or swords. I finally knew why. From the tip of their blades shot fire, water, gust of wind, lightning, and even one of them shot out a rock. Morzan gazed lazily at the attacks threw at him by the guards and raised his finger. Dark mist came out from the tip of his finger covering the blasts shot by the guards and the attacks flew back at the guards, this time with dark mist covering it. "I just came back to take my friend's sister", said Zolan. Suddenly, I heard a roar so loud that I almost burst my ear drums. The voice was definitely not human. The ground begin to shake and running towards me was a an eight-foot tall giant screaming his lungs out.
But something was wrong about him, or should I say it. The giant looked like it was sewn together. I saw a giant bone stuck on its back with the scar open, oozing blood all over his shoulder. He wore ragged clothes and was bald. he also had one eye, the other was just a hole. "DEEEEEE!!!" shouted the big giant."Calm down Baku, you promised me you would", said Zolan, "Return to us the girl you have held captive or I will rain hell into your little castle." I looked to the villagers and saw that they were actually scared of Zolan. One of them even say, "Give him what he wants!" I saw Sef running out of the village house doors that was actually Guardians Castle. "Ah, hello Sef, long time it is since the last time we were in battle", said Zolan. "Why should we listen to you?" said Sef. "Isn't it obvious? The Dark Sun is upon us and is siding me. Death will come to you even if you try to fight", said Zolan. I could see Sef sweating. "What does he mean, when he said the Dark Sun is upon us?" I asked. "You see, in Sorenia there are three suns that govern the us. Light, Dark and Equal Suns. The Light Sun sides the Light beings and gives them power and the Dark Sun sides the Dark beings and gives them power. The Equal Sun sides bothe Light and Dark beings and is a sign of peace. When the Equal Sun is governing us, all wars between the two races must stop until the Equal Sun goes down. Although that law is slowly crumbling thanks to Zolan.
Morzan stared at me with his cold eyes. "This current Saberboy is even more stupider than the last one", said Zolan, "And to think that he is the son of Michael Brown Saberboy. Did Sef tell you that he was banished and killed" Huh? Did he just say my father's name? I looked to Sef to see him looking down. I was going to tell you about your father. Don't get me wrong. I want you to know about your father", said Sef. But I didn't care what Sef said. All I wanted was answers. Answers about my father. And the only one who can tell me about my father was Zolan. "Tell me about my father", I asked. "Your father was a worthy opponent until he was eliminated", said Zolan. Eliminated? he said it as if my father was just part of his silly game until he was killed. Instantly my feelings rushed into my head. angry feelings. I screamed and ran straight at him. I jumped up and felt myself floating and zooming towards Zolan. The Saber materialized in my hands and I swung it sideways at him hoping to cut him in half. I did. The Saber slashed at his chest and came out the other direction. I could see him smiling as his hip separated from his chest, dropping on the floor.
At that time, I actually felt happy when I killed him. A smile crept at my lips and I couldn't help grin at Zolan's dead body. My eyes went wild and my hands were shaking. I was going psychotic. I looked at Baku and zoomed straight down towards him, ready to stab him in the chest. Baku lashed his right arm at me. I parried it and cut his right arm off. I pulled back Saber and thrust its tip right into his chest. I looked at Baku to see that he was still alive. And angry. He roared at me and raised his left hand in front of my face and a blast of impact hit my face, sending me flying on my back. The pain was unbearable. I was beginning to get dizzy when I saw Sef, pulling me up. I regained little conciousness to see that Baku's palm was smoking. A hole could be seen on the center of his palm. I finally realised that Baku's entire left arm was a giant cannon. I looked around to see Zolan, standing next to his dead body, carrying Dee in his arms. I didn't get it at all. I thought I killed him. "I really enjoyed our battle Justin", said Zolan, "Too bad I wasn't there to see it. Ask Sef to explain later. I came here and got what I wanted. It's time to take my leave. Come Baku and reattach your arm. We'll fix that hole in your chest later." Baku picked up his right arm and put it back where I cut it off. I could heard soft metal clanking as Baku slowly reattach his arm. He moved his right arm around and looked at me saying, "Next time I'll smash you to bits!" he walked next to Zolan as dark mists surrounded them and then quickly became thin covering no one. Baku and Zolan were gone.

To Be Continued.......

Saberboy-Chapter 5(Part 2)

I woke up in a start as the same nightmare about me killing children haunted me again. I could not forget about the girl's face as she screamed when she turned into complete sand. I then realize that it was still midnight and Sef was not in his bed. I got out of my bed and got out of the room the Fidleman put me in. I walked around the long hallway trying to clear my head. That's when I heard someone screamed. I quickly ran to where the scream came from I looked to my left to see a door. The scream was coming from that room so I opened the door softly and peek into the room. What I saw made me realise that Sorenia wasn't what I thought it was. Standing inside the room chained to the walls was a small girl wearing ragged clothes. The way she was standing showed me that she was not in good shape. Inside the room were two more men. One standing in front of the girl, the other at the back. The man in the front was wearing deep blue robes that fell to the floor. The man I guess was in his 80's because he had long gray beard that reach to his elbows and bushy eyebrows that covered his eyes. "Tell us what we need to know and you can leave here alive", said the old guy in a calm voice. The girl got silent for a while and spat on the floor. "Never!" said the girl. "So be it", said the old guy. He motioned to the guy at the back. The other guy was like a bodybuilder. He was wearing a sleeveless brown vest that showed his biceps and a pair of dark brown shorts. The guy was wearing a black mask that covered his face to his neck. There were hoiles for his eyes and a small hole for the mouth. Conclusion, this guy look like an executioner. The big guy walked to the side of the wall and tokk out a nasty whip that was about a few feet long. The worse thing was, the whip was burning hot. "Last chance", said the old guy. The girl just looked down. The old guy put his hand down and the big guy smack the whip right at the girls back with full force. The girl cried out in pain.
I, on other hand was covering my hands to forget that horrible scene. This was wrong, they were torturing a girl. My body was entirely shaken. I couldn't take the pressure. I heard the whip lash again and the girl screaming her lungs out. I couldn't take it anymore. Instead, I went into action mode. I burst right in the room, uninvited. The two bullies really took my surprise move. They were stunned and the big guy drop his whip. I stand in front of them and asked them in my most serious tone. "Stop what you're doing right now and let her go." The old guy didn't know how to react. He quickly asked the big guy to unlock the cuffs. All four cuffs were unlocked and the two guys left the room. I looked at the girl lying down on the floor. She was really hurt. She turned her head around and our eyes met. Somehow I thought I've seen those eyes before. Then the horrible truth hit me. She was the sand-girl that attacked me on the field that Sef brought me to train. She stared at me and let out a smile. "You really are the true Saberboy", said the girl. She collapse on the floor. I ran to her and checked her breathing. I would love to tell you that she was alive but she wasn't. She was dead. I suddenly feel very angry at the Council Of Elders. How could they let this happen? I left the girl there and ran straight for the courtroom that I was in when I first met the council.
I blasted through the door and saw that everyone was there seated and the two guys were talking so quick I could barely hear a word. Everyone was shocked by my sudden appearance. I guess I have developed a bad habit of shocking people. Sef was also in the room. He looked better than before. "What brings you here Saberboy? You need to rest", said Sef. "What did you do to that girl?" I said. I was really mad right now. All of them kept silent. Nobody was answering at all. "Answer me!" I shouted. "There seems to be a misunderstanding", said a guy sitting on the big table. "There was no mistake. I saw those two torturing that little girl and I want to know why!" I shouted. Suddenly the ground was shaking. I didn't know whether I did it or it was something else. My answer came a second later. A man came bursting into the room and said, "Council, Zolan is here." That got everyone shocked. The man was wearing all yellow. I'm serious. His shirt, pants and shoes were all yellow. He also wore a yellow robe with a mark at the back. It had a circle in it and stars in all four directions. In the circle was about nine dots with different colours. Red, blue, yellow, white, green, black, purple, silver, and gold. They were all surrounding a black star. It was a very weird logo. Immediately the four old men and women started barking orders to the other people who were sitting on the table. Everything was a blurr. It was just too sudden. Suddenly I felt a hand pulling me out of the crowd. I was pulled out of the room and I saw who it was. Sef. Man, was I glad to see him back in shape. "Saberboy, you need to get out of here", said Sef. "No", was all I could say. Sef looked at me as if I was crazy. "If this is the guy that I'm facing with, then I want him to have a good look at me." I pushed Sef aside and ran for the exit. I blasted through the door and look back to see a small house like before. I quickly looked up and saw my opponent.

To Be Continued......

Saberboy-Chapter 5(Part 1)

Hey everyone. So now you've known my strange story so far. First I was a normal school boy but now I just got sucked into a black hole with a man in shining armor and a teacher, faced with a challenge to defeat some freaking monster and now killing a small boy and having a mysterious guy controlling my mind and body. And now I'm where I am so far. Let the adventure begin...
I woke up from a terrible nightmare I had. In my dream, I saw myself killing a small boy, and then killing a girl the same age as the boy. Suddenly, reality pulled me back, real hard. A sharp pain shot through my shoulder like a heavy boulder. I hold my shoulder with my other hand and screamed a pain of agony. But the pain last even longer because after moving my hand, another sharp pain shot through my other hand and I shouted again. I guessed someone heard me because after that a bunch of men and women wearing medical clothes ran straight into a room that I was...in? Huh? How could I be in a room? I was in confusion when a man wearing medical clothes but blue, unlike the others who were wearing red commanding the other men and women. A woman help me to lie down as the others treated on my wounded shoulders. I lied down slowly and landed on something soft, something that I had needed for a long time. A bed. I was lying on a soft comfy bed. What was happening? I was about to shout 'Can somebody tell me what's going on?!' when I saw someone else lying on another bed just beside me.
It was Sef. His entire body was wrapped with bandages and he was lying asleep, I hope. One of the red medical guys gave an ointment on my shoulders after it was stitched. It felt strangely cold and after a moment, I felt as if a giant weight had been lifted out of me. I was going to jump around in the air when I remembered what happened the first time. Definitely not going to try that again until I'm allowed to. I tried to lie down and rest. The blue medical man was writing on a board and staring at me like I was a specimen. I looked to the man and then to Sef and asked, "Can you check if Sef is okay?" The man stared at me blankly and broke out a smile. "A man who cares for himself can only prosper for himself. A man who cares for other can prosper for everyone", said the man. He walked over to Sef and checked a monitor board that was checking his pulse. I guess this place is like a hospital in Earth and that guy was a doctor. Then the men and women just now are...nurse? I don't get it but that wasn't the point. The doctor looked to the monitor and then took out another board from a table next to Sef and wrote something on it. He then returned to me and said, "He'll be fine. He's actually in a better shape than you are", said the doctor. "Who are you?", I asked. "I am Fidleman, one of the finest tripox in this hospital", said the doctor known as Fidleman. Wait, did he just say tripox rather than doctor? "Umm, what is a tripox?", I asked. "Oh, it is a specialist in medical history that combines pharmacist, doctor and therapist into one job which is called tripox", said Doc. Fidleman. Wow, a job that consists three other jobs. I don't ever wanna know how he got a diploma for that. I tried to get up again but Doc Fidleman inisist that I continue to rest. But something was bugging me the whole time I was in this hospital. "Umm, did you happen to see any kids lying around next to me while I fainted? Like around the age of seven", I asked. "Don't worry. They're taken care of", said Doc Fidleman. "What do you mean?", I asked again. "Just lie down and relax. Everything has been taken care of", said Doc Fidleman as I slowly close my eyes and sleep.

To Be Continued......

Saberboy-Chapter 4(Part 3)

Suddenly, I heard a voice somewhere near me saying, "Don't be scared, Justin. Always know that I am here by your side." Out of nowhere, my body started tingling and my body was moving. By itself. Someone had taken control of my body. The question was, is this person good or evil? I felt as if someone was pulling me up to my feet and raising Saber in front of me. My body jumped out of the crater and holding Saber with both hands. While I was still in mid-air, the tip of saber lit up and a giant dark wave shot out of it blowing up the ground at where Zee was. I was shocked. I was saying to myself, "Holy cow! Did I kill that kid?" But another part of me actually said, "Cool blast! Got him right on the spot!" My body, no, my heart was in freeze mode and I had trouble breathing for awhile but I soon got over it. I looked down to the ground ready to land smoothly but something caught my eye. Maybe it was because Dee was there or maybe because Dee was carrying Zee in his arms, bleeding in the chest. My eyes locked into Dee's eyes. It was cold and evil, full of anger and pain. Dee laid Zee softly on the ground and buried him.
No, maybe buried isn't the word for it. I mean, Dee buried Zee but not like digging the ground and laying Zee's body and then bury it. No, this was like Dee moving the sand with a twist of her hand like she was actually controlling and burying Zee by making a quicksand just below him that sucked him down to the ground. But the one thing that scared me the most was that Dee's eyes were still locked on me. She picked up some of the sand in her hand and threw them to the air. The sand circled around in the air, becoming sharp stakes, aiming at me, at coming at me in full speed. Holy crap it's coming after me! I tried to move my body but, oh yeah, my body's being controlled by someone else. How did I forget? Fortunately, the guy controlling my body knew the danger. I floated in the air and flew up to the sky, pointing Saber at Dee. Oh no, not again. I couldn't bare to see myself kill another kid. The tip of the sword began lighting up and blasted another giant dark wave straight for Dee. "No!", I shouted, finally able to control my mouth. But it was too late. The giant dark wave was already heading straight for Dee and I couldn't stop it. The giant wave blasted right on the spot, just like how it did to Zee. The explosion created a loud boom and sand was flying everywhere.
I watched in shock waiting for the sand to clear. The sand began to go thinner and I saw Dee looking completely, unharmed. Huh? Were my eyes seeing right? There she was standing there without even a single bruise as though the giant dark wave was just a small little thing. She raised her hand and pointed to me and said in a low, cold voice, "Die, enemy." Sand began to rise from the ground creating sand stakes in all directions. The stakes zoomed and aimed straight at me. There was no escape. I was surrounded and I was going to have holes in my body, but would I realise that if I die first? A feeling of fright crept out of me. Would I survive? Then the next moment was blank. I'm serious. It's like a block in my mind was taken away. The last thing I remembered was a surging pulse shooting from my heart and the words of the mysterious man saying, "Let go..."

To Be Continued........

Saberboy-Chapter 4(Part 2)

I walked out from the crater(which was bigger than a meteorite crater after all) and walked to Sef. We sat on a log and he took out to cans of 100plus. Amazing. this guy even knew how to smuggle in my favourite soft drink. We popped in open and drank a gulpful(although I was the one getting sweaty and not Sef) and chat for a while. Suddenly I had this strange feeling that someone was watching us, sitting down silently, just looking at us with a blank look. I turned my back to see two boys and girls, about seven or eight years old sitting down quietly playing with a small toy box. The boy had scrawny hair and eyelids heavier than my aunt Prickley. He was wearing a white top and some baggy shorts. The girl had long, golden hair that fall pass her shoulder. Her face was way different than the boy. It was a cute, cheerful face that showed that this girl had some spirit.They were giggling and talking softly that I couldn't make out anything. "Who are those kids over there?", I asked Sef. Sef didn't respond. He was still talking and talking like some maniac. He even turn his back on me and talked to the empty space as though someone was there. "Hey, hello, anybody home?", I asked, waving my hand up and down in front of his eyes. he was still staring into the empty space, rambling and laughing. "Hey! Would you quit ignoring me?", I shouted at him but he was still talking to the thin air.
Suddenly I heard a voice from behind that spooked me out. It was a kid's voice but it sounded like a dead man's croak. "He can't hear you. He got trap by our dust smoke. Silly man", said the voice. I looked to the back only to find out that it was the boy's voice. He got up and urged the girl to follow. The girl was still holding the toy box which I now realise had a big red button. "What do you mean?", I asked them. "See for yourself", the girl giggled. I looked at him to find his pleseant eyes had went black, and his ears were like covered with smoke. "Did you do this to him?", I asked them. "Yes,we did", said the two children. "Well, can you take it off him?", I asked again time with a pleseant voice. "No, we can't. If we do that, we will get scolded by big brother and he is very mean when he is angry", said the boy. "Who are you? Where is your brother? I'd like to talk to him", I said. "My name is Zee and her name is Dee. We are twins and our brother is somewhere else. I'm afraid you cannot talk to him", said the boy named Zee. "Well, can you please let the man go? I will explain to your brother", I said. "We cannot do that,we were ordered by big brother to come get you", said Dee.
Come get me? What did that meant? Suddenly, I realise that the 'toy box' was no ordinary box. But I only found that out after I felt the pain. Dee raised up the toy box and pressed the red button and said, "Sorry, but we don't have any choice." Suddenly, BOOM! The ground beneath me blowed up like a big explosion and sent me flying to the air. The box wasn't a toy, it was a detonator and it blowed up in front of my face. The explosion threw me of my feet. I was flying up in the air, bleeding from the explosion. Suddenly, Dee took out what look like a mining sickle, except that was as big as a spear a sharp tip on the end. She raised the sickle and threw it to the far side of the forest and the ground exploded to a crater big enough to hold, me. The crazy thing was, I was falling right into the crater. I made a crash landing in the crater. I was shouting in pain. I had never felt this much pain before. Worse, the crater that Dee made was burning hot and it was burning me alive. I could feel my skin prickling and my blood gushing through from my chest. Suddenly, Zee materialized in front of me and said, "Too easy." Suddenly, I felt the ground lifting up. I moved to the edge and saw Zee carrying the crater with one hand. My body couldn't move and I was shaking with fear. These kids are crazy and they're taking me with them. I felt like my body was numb. I couldn't even raise my finger and my blood was still oozing out from my chest.

To Be Continued.......

Saberboy-Chapter 4(Part 1)

Hey again everyone. Finally, I am about to cover up the beginning of my story. Although, I don't think I can write about what's happening here anymore. You don't get it do you? Well, you'll get it when you finish this chapter. As you all know, my last chapter ended when I told you my reasons to stay and to fight Warlock's monsters. So, let's start at where we left off.
Sef brought me to his home. His home was a small village house somewhere among the other village houses. But that's how it looked on the outside, when I went in I was shock because it was the same as Guardians Castle. Sef's house was three stories high. The living room had a small sofa and a table. There was also a shelf to the side full with tiny bottles which I think was full of magic stuff. Next to a shelf was a television, except it was made of glass and pictures were moving inside the mirror. I guess that was a modern television and it was totally cool. Sef saw me looking at the TV and said "It isn't a normal television. It is used to travel to different planets and it also is a command signal." Don't ask me what he's talking about, even I don't know. On the second floor, It was full with rooms, 5 in particular and the third floor was a library. not just any library, I mean like a giant library. I could see shelves lining up about three and a half feet tall, full with books. "That is your room", said Sef. He pointed at a room on the second floor. The door was made of wood but the weird thing was, the door had my name on it. I went to the doorstep and opened it. Guess what I saw? I saw my own room back on earth, in my house. It looked just the same as ever. My clothes lied around the floor and a bunch of comic books on my bed. My computer was there too. I tried to on it and surf the net but it couldn't I guess this place doesn't have broadband or streamyx. Sef walked into my room and said "How can you live in a mess in this?" I laughed. It felt good. It was my first laugh since coming to this new place. I tried to clean up my room and tidy it up a bit. Finally, my room looked like the cleanest bed on earth. I was stumped. I sat on the sofa and tried to rest. Suddenly Sef sat next to me. His face was serious. I knew that he was thinking about the challenge. "So when is the coming of the sun of Soltifei?", I asked. "The coming of the sun of Soltifei is three days away", said Perseus. I was shocked. How could I face the challenge of killing monsters in three days when I don't know anything. I mean, I don't even know how to hold and swing a sword. "Sef, can I go back to my planet and tell everyone that I'm okay?", I asked. Sef looked down and sighed. "I better explain to you about spacial teleportation. Spacial teleportation is sort of like going to a place in a blink of an eye except spacial teleportation is much more different. Spacial teleportation is able to bring someone from one planet to another. As you should know, there are many galaxies in the universe which no possible human can go to in your planet. But spacial teleportation allows us to go anywhere we want as in from earth to mars or from earth to this place. Where you are right now is called Sorenia. Sorenia is the closest to heaven and the most advanced planet in the universe", said Sef. "So, how advanced is earth?" I asked. "Not really that advanced but don't worry, there are more planets which time has stopped for them so they are less advanced than earth", said Sef. "Who's Zolan?", I asked. Suddenly, Sef went silent. "Zolan, is the person you must defeat", said Sef.
"I thought I had to defeat Warlock's monsters?""Yes, and you also have to defeat him", said Sef. "Is he as strong as Warlock's monsters?" "He is stronger than Warlock"s monsters by a zillion times.""Then who is he?" "He is the current master of darkness.""Huh? I don't understand.""I mean, he is the real threat that threatens to turn the entire universe upside down."
"What does he want?", I asked. "He wants to turn all of the universe into darkness, destroying all good", said Sef, "Follow me Saberboy, It is time to train you." We went outside of his house and I looked back at his house, puzzled because the real size of this house was much bigger than the size of the village house. I wonder if all of the village houses were the same as Sef's. We walked out of the brick of wall and into an open spaced field. Sef asked me to unsheathe my sword to begin with his 'training'. Suddenly a straw puppet appeared beside him. "I want you to hit this straw puppet with all you've got", said Sef. So I thought, why not I try this baby and try to do some violence. I charged to the straw puppet, raised my sword, and slashed the straw puppet as hard as I could. Suddenly something weird happened in a kind of slow motion way. My sword touched the straw puppet's head and it tore in half but that wasn't the end. Suddenly my tip wasn't touching the straw puppet anymore, the straw puppet go torn to pieces before my sword could even touch it and the gap was getting larger. The force around me was heavy, I felt a little blur at that time but not blur enough to see something that shocked me. The straw puppet was torn to pieces from head to foot alright, but suddenly the ground beneath me crack open like a black hole. And the ground began cracking until it left a huge hole like a meteorite had just hit it. I couldn't move at that time, I was stunned completely by what I did. The weird thing was that I didn't even know what I DID myself. I spaced out a little but return to reality in a blink of an eye and looked at Sef with my face sweating like crazy. I just did something unbelievable and I felt, scared. But suddenly, he gave me those comforting eyes I hadn't seen in him before. It was gentle and soft and he smiled at me. He was impressed at me, way impressed. I smiled too, I was happy. I completed his 'training' in one day. I'm so awesome!

To Be Continued......